Yes the forums are quiet… but I guess we all already have one or two music/production related forums that we frequent and it’s hard to just create an active forum community out of a couple of dozen students.
As for you track, well it’s not my style but I think it hits the right sound for the style. It’s pretty in-your-face, with nice punchy drums and the balance seems good. Perhaps in the section around 2:11, where you have the trance-saw lead with bass and kickdrum, I think the lead sound is a bit too high-cut. There is a bit more room there for some mid frequency content and now it sounds like there’s a bit of a hole there. Sorry I can’t really say anything more detailed than that.